tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post1513842203521864098..comments2023-05-30T09:30:37.014-06:00Comments on Teaching and Learning in...: Funny story by Jason M.Jeff Lewishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02564433564117231418noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-15579614255841213692007-10-08T13:59:00.000-06:002007-10-08T13:59:00.000-06:00Hi Jason. Wow, your story kept me very interested....Hi Jason. Wow, your story kept me very interested. You did a great job retelling the events in a way that was not confusing. I am glad that everything turned out ok.<BR/>Mrs. MorganThe Morgan Clanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17941691448730225556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-20141602146709957882007-09-28T08:57:00.000-06:002007-09-28T08:57:00.000-06:00Wow! Your story was very suspenseful! I got nerv...Wow! Your story was very suspenseful! I got nervous wondering what was in the house with you and your mother. I really loved the way you built up the tension by not revealing too much; yet keeping us the readers, engaged with descriptive language.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-49250694593363390042007-09-25T11:36:00.000-06:002007-09-25T11:36:00.000-06:00your funny story was great because you thout there...your funny story was great because you thout there was a gost in your basement and because you thought you saw blue eaysashlyn zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00432059749155870109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-12065966961496311972007-09-23T23:12:00.000-06:002007-09-23T23:12:00.000-06:00Your story is like a good mystery, or a scary movi...Your story is like a good mystery, or a scary movie. I wanted to keep reading to find out what was going on with the noise that you heard. I think it is a good goal to work on your spelling. I want to complement you on the hard work you put in. I also think you should be proud for getting it done.Jeff Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02564433564117231418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-15506949962497874202007-09-21T14:50:00.000-06:002007-09-21T14:50:00.000-06:00Jason,I thought your story was clever. It is funn...Jason,<BR/><BR/>I thought your story was clever. It is funny and thrilling to create excitement and fear and then let the reader in on your little secret--just a pair of shoes. <BR/><BR/>I was also impressed with your reflection. It is a good goal to want to become a better speller. <BR/><BR/>Think about how you hook your reader at the beginning of the story. Start with a dramatic sentence like, "The night 15 cops came to my house with guns drawn was one of the scariest and funniest nights of my life!" <BR/><BR/>I loved your story. I will share with my family.Joseph Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858720265912708615noreply@blogger.com