tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post4203040619055647538..comments2023-05-30T09:30:37.014-06:00Comments on Teaching and Learning in...: when i scered my grandmaJeff Lewishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02564433564117231418noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-84708905111459623642007-10-10T11:11:00.000-06:002007-10-10T11:11:00.000-06:00i like your story because you scared your granma a...i like your story because you scared your granma and she almost peed her pantsstephanie shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14201713551549232777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-40362346796627583142007-09-23T23:27:00.000-06:002007-09-23T23:27:00.000-06:00"Jumped out of her skin" really helps us understan..."Jumped out of her skin" really helps us understand how scared she was. At the end you say, "you should have been there". Remember, your job as a writer is to help the reader think they are actually there.Jeff Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02564433564117231418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-77168859715998039762007-09-21T15:08:00.000-06:002007-09-21T15:08:00.000-06:00Ashlyn,I like your story and the imagery. I could...Ashlyn,<BR/><BR/>I like your story and the imagery. I could just see a grandmother jumping "out of her skin." That is a nice way to put it.<BR/><BR/>Why did you want to scare your grandmother? Does your grandmother look around the door before coming in now? Do you like to scare other people?<BR/><BR/>Good paper.Joseph Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858720265912708615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-79472415087748794672007-09-21T10:06:00.000-06:002007-09-21T10:06:00.000-06:00i like your story because you scared you grandmai like your story because you scared you grandmastephanie shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14201713551549232777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-45202659318442705312007-09-21T10:05:00.000-06:002007-09-21T10:05:00.000-06:00i like your story when your grandma got scared and...i like your story when your grandma got scared and jumped.monicathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02557514040195155506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-73360263783185174422007-09-21T09:59:00.000-06:002007-09-21T09:59:00.000-06:00i like it because when u scared your grandma she j...i like it because when u scared your grandma she juped out of her sinisaac ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16728879559236392638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-42059218469523702122007-09-21T09:58:00.000-06:002007-09-21T09:58:00.000-06:00Nice story Erik HAHAHANice story Erik HAHAHAjose chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05838621806353352751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-90303482474802642652007-09-21T09:50:00.000-06:002007-09-21T09:50:00.000-06:00Wow that part when you scared your grandma was fun...Wow that part when you scared your grandma was funnyabigailmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07463367320595076014noreply@blogger.com