tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post972742790209465625..comments2023-05-30T09:30:37.014-06:00Comments on Teaching and Learning in...: my funny store by stephanie wJeff Lewishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02564433564117231418noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-22821438183723656412007-10-10T11:00:00.000-06:002007-10-10T11:00:00.000-06:00Iloved your storyIloved your storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-58497832555728483852007-09-23T23:48:00.000-06:002007-09-23T23:48:00.000-06:00That was the weirdest day ever, but was it the fun...That was the weirdest day ever, but was it the funniest? Work on adding details about what was going on around you to make your story more interesting. Good job!Jeff Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02564433564117231418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3668150268652017501.post-29598546612201879572007-09-21T15:06:00.000-06:002007-09-21T15:06:00.000-06:00Stephanie,Good job on your writing. That seems li...Stephanie,<BR/><BR/>Good job on your writing. That seems like an important memory for you. Do you think about that day a lot? Were you scared when it happened? Or were you anxious?<BR/><BR/>I think a few more details would be a good idea. <BR/><BR/>Good job.Joseph Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858720265912708615noreply@blogger.com