What I like about my writing is............ the reason I like my story is it is kind of funny,cool If I did it over again I woud improve it by....................... trying to write more and make it longer and more funny. overall I feel................................. really good but coud of been beter.
Quinton, you could make the story even funnier by adding lots of details about the scene. I am glad you wrote that in your reflection.
ReplyDeletequinton I liked the way you descrived your story.
ReplyDeletehey i like your story because the little girl open the cage and the rabbit ran out
ReplyDeletei like your story
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