Friday, September 21, 2007

Antonio's Funny Story

What I like about my writing is that it is really good. Next time I need to work on my spelling. Overall, it is good.
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12 comments:

  1. Jeff LewisSeptember 23, 2007 at 11:06 PM

    Your story sounds like you Antonio. I really laughed the first time I read it. I think you should add more details leading to the funniest moment.

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  2. monicatSeptember 25, 2007 at 11:17 AM

    your story was really funny.

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  3. uriel.rSeptember 25, 2007 at 11:28 AM

    I like your story but you missed spelled at least 2 words.

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  4. hector mSeptember 25, 2007 at 11:35 AM

    antonio i like that story but the most funniest part to me is when your pants fell down then your face turn red.after that you thought sombody saw you.antonio i bet nobody did.

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  5. ashlyn zSeptember 25, 2007 at 11:42 AM

    I thought your story was funny.

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2007 at 8:44 AM

    I liked your story very much! I have had similar experiences with clothing that did not fit. It really is embarrassing. I liked that you told me about the same problem happening in different places.

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  7. Dave TarwaterOctober 2, 2007 at 10:57 AM

    An interesting day for you Antonio, I bet you don't forget to wear your belt again.

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  8. Emily TaylorOctober 4, 2007 at 9:55 AM

    Impressive story, Antonio! I could imagine it in my mind as I read it! I think you turn some of your sentences into compound sentences to add some more sentence fluency to your writing.

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  9. The Morgan ClanOctober 8, 2007 at 1:50 PM

    Hi Antonio. I really enjoyed your story. I think you did a great job writing about your emotions, I could actually picture the look on your face!
    Mrs. Morgan

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  10. AnonymousOctober 10, 2007 at 8:27 AM

    I laughed out loud when I read your story. I would have liked to read more! Good job!

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  11. AnonymousOctober 10, 2007 at 10:59 AM

    I liked the way you descriveed it

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  12. stephanie sOctober 10, 2007 at 11:02 AM

    hey antonio i like your story because your'e pants fell down

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