Thursday, December 20, 2007

My favorite object

. 1 . The best part of my essay is the smartboard.
2.The part that stil needs work is the ipod.
3.The mainthing i learned about expositori writing isto explain.
4.Next time i do en assay i would like to do more information.

by Rayel
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2 comments:

  1. Erik G.December 21, 2007 at 10:07 AM

    Good job Rayel, also try to use better grammar I couldn't understand your writing.

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  2. hector mDecember 21, 2007 at 10:42 AM

    It was really good but you spelled something wrong.But it was a good story.

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