Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Cars

I did my photos are the best.
I struggle on the texed on the photos.
Next time I will do better.

8 comments:

  1. I like your writing but it needs to be longer.

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  2. Your writing really was great,but you have to have your voice go louder

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  3. "my writting is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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  4. jason your story was good and the volume was excellent. You had really good pictures and captions.

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  5. You did a really nice job of matching your photos and your narration. I appreciated when you showed the picture of WalMart.

    I agree with your classmates that it was a little hard to hear you at times. Maybe just remember to keep the microphone a consistent distance from your mouth.

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