Saturday, February 23, 2008

Come To Field Day






















1. I typed this writing to persuave people to come to field day.

2. The best part about my story is that it persuaves people.

3. I had a hard time finding a picture of kids playing like if was field day.

4. Next time I will try to persuave people even more.
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6 comments:

  1. hector mFebruary 26, 2008 at 10:01 AM

    Monica,everything was good but you didnt tell them that its only at like the 6 last day of school.

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  2. edith rFebruary 26, 2008 at 10:09 AM

    hey monica it was good but some things don't make sense to me but u still did good.

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  3. christian aFebruary 29, 2008 at 11:36 AM

    I like the way you explained what you got to do at field day.

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  4. bobby gFebruary 29, 2008 at 11:38 AM

    nice job monicat

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  5. fernando bFebruary 29, 2008 at 11:39 AM

    I think your story was awesome but some things dont make sense.

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  6. abigailmMarch 21, 2008 at 10:13 AM

    1st it's not persuave it's persuade
    Next great story

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