I agree that your conclusion was well done. I also liked how you introduced the story. I think it was good that you kept the listener oriented by saying "first, second, third". I would have liked to see the pictures coordinated with the points you were making. Great story!
I think you did a good job on your store.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job on your store.
ReplyDeleteI agree that your conclusion was well done. I also liked how you introduced the story. I think it was good that you kept the listener oriented by saying "first, second, third". I would have liked to see the pictures coordinated with the points you were making. Great story!
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