Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Ladies Gone Crazy by Monica


I like my story because it is funny.

I will work harder on making my story longer.

Overall, I feel great about my story.




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8 comments:

  1. abigailmSeptember 20, 2007 at 10:08 AM

    That must have been funny watching that video!

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  2. Erik G.September 20, 2007 at 10:10 AM

    Monica's story is cool!!!

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  3. hector mSeptember 20, 2007 at 10:12 AM

    monica I saw that video to its funny

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  4. edith rSeptember 20, 2007 at 10:44 AM

    funny story haha!!!!

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  5. Erik G.September 21, 2007 at 9:52 AM

    Your story is funny because the lady hits herself with a hammock now that is funny.HaHaHaHaHaHaHa!!!

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  6. stephanie sSeptember 21, 2007 at 10:01 AM

    i like our story because when you said that she went crazy that was funny

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  7. Jeff LewisSeptember 23, 2007 at 11:44 PM

    This is a very funny story. Sometimes our own lives are even funnier than what you see on TV. I want you to spend more time at the beginning brainstorming possible ideas. Sometimes you will spend a lot of time deciding what to write about and then the actual story is very easy to write because your topic is perfect.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 10, 2007 at 10:08 AM

    i really like your story

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