Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Falling on a Mud Puddle by Stephanie S.

What I like most about my writing is that it's realy funny.
Next time,i will work on expanding my funny part.
Overall,all i feel happy about my story.



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8 comments:

  1. Erik G.September 20, 2007 at 10:07 AM

    Stephanie S. story is cool!!!

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  2. hector mSeptember 20, 2007 at 10:10 AM

    I like your story because you fell in the mudd

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  3. abigailmSeptember 20, 2007 at 10:17 AM

    hahahahahahh thats so funny

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  4. edith rSeptember 20, 2007 at 10:42 AM

    i like your story it is funny hahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!

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  5. Erik G.September 21, 2007 at 9:56 AM

    When you fell in the mud I starded to laught that's funny!!!!!!!!!

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  6. stephanie sSeptember 21, 2007 at 10:11 AM

    i like my story because when i fell in the puddle of mud

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  7. Jeff LewisSeptember 23, 2007 at 11:47 PM

    I like this story because you fell in the mud... then you got jumped on... then you got jumped on again! Unbelievable! This is a very funny story. I think you are right in your reflection that you should work on expanding your funny part. The details make your story really great.

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  8. hector mOctober 10, 2007 at 10:57 AM

    since i read it again i didnt get it it was confusing

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