Thursday, December 20, 2007

HOW TO DO A BIRD HOUSE


1.The best part of my essay is talking about the bird house.
2.The part that still needs workI show to make it.
3.The main thing I learned about expository wiring ishave to take a lot of time.
4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to tell about more things of the essay.
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10 comments:

  1. monicatDecember 21, 2007 at 10:08 AM

    your story is good and it was good that you told the steps and the things you need.

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  2. edith rDecember 21, 2007 at 10:08 AM

    you did good at expanding details on your story

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  3. paul lDecember 21, 2007 at 10:14 AM

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  4. paul lDecember 21, 2007 at 10:14 AM

    Your story is very great

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  5. Erik G.December 21, 2007 at 10:16 AM

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  6. Erik G.December 21, 2007 at 10:18 AM

    That was a cool story, I liked the way you wrote about changing clothes and shoes so they won't get dirty.

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  7. uriel.rDecember 21, 2007 at 10:23 AM

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  9. AnonymousDecember 21, 2007 at 10:35 AM

    I like your writing because it has a lot of detils.Also you tell the reder like he or she going to build a perfect bird house.I also like howe much you write. Mostly I like your voic in this writing it sounds like you.And your writing is exiting.

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  10. stephanie wDecember 21, 2007 at 1:56 PM

    It is good and you have a lot of details.

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