Thursday, December 20, 2007

What I like to do when I am alone


The best part of my essay is that I describes what I do when i am alone.


The part that still needs work is making longer sentences.


The main thing I learned about expository writing is that it's something that you do or something about you.


Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to add more details and make longer sentences.
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7 comments:

  1. ashlyn zDecember 21, 2007 at 10:11 AM

    I like the way you ask yourself ?s.

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  2. Erik G.December 21, 2007 at 10:14 AM

    Nice job do you really know how to do fancy names that's awesome, anyway I really liked your story about what you like to do when your alone.

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  3. jason mDecember 21, 2007 at 10:17 AM

    you spelled eveything good only you made spaces.

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  4. quinton pDecember 21, 2007 at 10:18 AM

    Well stephanie drawling really sounds like fun to you and your brother what is your favorite thing to drawl?how long have you been drawling?

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  5. paul lDecember 21, 2007 at 10:19 AM

    That was a very nice story because I love drawing to.

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  6. stephanie wDecember 21, 2007 at 10:20 AM

    Its cool because it is fun to read it.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2008 at 11:34 AM

    i though it was cool and funny

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