What I like about my story is that it is funny.If I did it over again I would improve on making more details.
Overal I feel happy and proud of my writing.
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2 comments:
Uriel,
I loved your story! I laughed really hard. You should feel very proud of your writing.
I think you are right, a few more details would improve the story. Also just a little work on the editing (spelling and extra words) would improve the story.
I am going to remember this story for a long time. It is definitely funny!
Very funny! You need more details at the end of your story. How hard were you two laughing? Did you get any sleep after that? Good job!
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