What I like to do when I am alone

The best part of my essay is that I describes what I do when i am alone.

The part that still needs work is making longer sentences.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is that it's something that you do or something about you.

Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to add more details and make longer sentences.

Folsom People

The Folsom People method of hunting was knives,spears but the Folsom points were smaller than the Clovis.

The Folsom People ate buffalo,deer,seeds,nuts and fruits.

The Folsom People lived in tepees and caves.

The Folsom People cooked and then split the buffaloes.They also spoke different languages.The flood uncovered unusually large bison bones .George McJunkin discovered them after a flash flood.

trip to Jupiter

this is what we liked i liked the whole photo story.

this is what we will do differently is make it longer.

Overall,we like our photo story a lot.

Falling on a Mud Puddle by Stephanie S.

What I like most about my writing is that it's realy funny.

Next time,i will work on expanding my funny part.

Overall,all i feel happy about my story.