Field Day by Ashlyn

I think the best thing I did is my conclusion. I struggled with my thierd paragraph. Next time I will work or my thierd paragraph.

Camping

The best part of my essay is when I taught you how to play Bunco.

The part that still needs work is expanding the details.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is the reds, greens,and yellows.

Next time I write an expository writing, I would like to write about my dog.

Folsom People

The Folsom People method of hunting was knives,spears but the Folsom points were smaller than the Clovis.

The Folsom People ate buffalo,deer,seeds,nuts and fruits.

The Folsom People lived in tepees and caves.

The Folsom People cooked and then split the buffaloes.They also spoke different languages.The flood uncovered unusually large bison bones .George McJunkin discovered them after a flash flood.

Info About Uranus

This is what we liked about our movie is that we worked hard on it.
This is what we will do differently next time we will work harder.
Overall,we are proud of are vidio.

when i scered my grandma

What I like most about my story is the funny part. Next time, I will work harder on my ending sentance. Overall,I feel great about my asome writing.