lava lamps

The thing I liked most about my photo story is that the pictures are pictures of some of my favorite lava lamps.The thing I had trouble with was how I did my recording.Next time I will want to write about wrestlers and wrestling cards.

Whats in that bag?????????

I think the best part of my essay is the middle.
The part that needs work is the end.
The main thing I learned about expository writing was its fun.
Next time I write an expository essay I would like to write about football.

Folsom People

The Folsom People method of hunting was knives,spears but the Folsom points were smaller than the Clovis.

The Folsom People ate buffalo,deer,seeds,nuts and fruits.

The Folsom People lived in tepees and caves.

The Folsom People cooked and then split the buffaloes.They also spoke different languages.The flood uncovered unusually large bison bones .George McJunkin discovered them after a flash flood.

what it is like on mercury!!

what I like about my story is it has pictures that goes with the words.
what I will try to do better next time is my voice.
overall I think I did a good job!

THE CRAZY BIRTHDAY by QUIUTON

What I like about my writing is............ the reason I like my story is it is kind of funny,cool If I did it over again I woud improve it by....................... trying to write more and make it longer and more funny. overall I feel................................. really good but coud of been beter.