B-Creative

What I did best was searching the images.
I struggled with recording.
Next time I will do an advertisement about something different.

How to make a blue spark!

1. The best part of my essay is the spark!
2. The part that still needs work is how exciting it is.
3. The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you have to explain something.
4. Next time I wite an expository essay, I would like to write about something thats more exiteing.

Basket Makers

Basket Makers almost didn't hunt,they planted crops. They ate corn and vegetables.

They lived in a cave but they were also nomadic which means they moved from place to place.

Some instersting facs are women cut their hair long and men left their hair long.

Mars

What we like about our photostory is our pictures.
What we will do diffrently next time is the narration.
Overall, we absolutly like it.

E beats A? by Abby

What I like most about my writing is my details. Next time, I will work harder on my topic sentance. Overall, I feel great about my fabulous writing.