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Friday, February 29, 2008

all about books



I think I did my best on my pictures.

I think I struggle with recording.

Next time I will do better pictures.

Beauty Cutie



What I did best was choosing the pictures.



I struggled on recording because somtimes they couldn't hear me.


Next time I will work on talking louder.

B-Creative

What I did best was searching the images.
I struggled with recording.
Next time I will do an advertisement about something different.

Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Soccer Ball

Cars

I did my photos are the best.
I struggle on the texed on the photos.
Next time I will do better.

Sport Cards

The thing that I did best on my photostory was that I spoke loud and clear. The thing that I struggled with was that I said sport cards yo much. Next time I will try to not say the topic to much.

Gary the snail



I think I did the best on my pictures. I really struggled recording. Next time i will work on recording.

Wrestling



The best thing I did was taking pictures and puting them on my fhoto story. I struggled on recording. Next time I am going to talk better on recording.

Trident Splash



What did I do best? I did best on my voice recording.
What did I struggle with? I struggled with putting the captions.
Next time I will do better with my captions.

Remote control car

The thing I did best is focusing on my witting.
What I struggled on was my spelling.
Next time I will ask the teacher how to spell words.

Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Field Day by Ashlyn

I think the best thing I did is my conclusion. I struggled with my thierd paragraph. Next time I will work or my thierd paragraph.

Monday, February 25, 2008

CINEMA LATINO













THE thing that I like most is when i talk about the movies.

THE THING THAT I HAD A HARD TIME WITH WAS THE TOPIC.

NEXT TIME I WILL WORK ON MY conclusion.

BRIDGES

The thing I liked most was when I was running. The hard part was when we never get to get a drink of water and evry body was tiryed of runnig. Next time I will write a new story.


Saturday, February 23, 2008

Come To Field Day






















1. I typed this writing to persuave people to come to field day.

2. The best part about my story is that it persuaves people.

3. I had a hard time finding a picture of kids playing like if was field day.

4. Next time I will try to persuave people even more.

Family Math Night

This is my persuasive event that happens at Alsup Elementary School.
The thing that I liked most about my persuasive writing was that I mentioned all the things that you get to do at family math night!Something that was a challenge was making it only 5 paragraphs!Next time I will try to pick a topic.Come to family math night!

A-Water!

I think I did best at explaining how much A-Water costs.I had a hard time taking pictures to match my writing.Next time I will try to add more details!

RVD & Batista

I think I did very well on my writing. I struggled on the captions. Next time, I will do better on my captions.

Game Boy Advance



The I like the most about the photostory is the are cool.
The thing that I had hard time was talking into the micaphone I got nercis.Three next time I will put more pictures.

Guitar Hero.Unleash your power of Guitar Hero!!




The thing I most like is the pictures of guitar hero.The thing I had a hard time was writing the story and making up the story.Next time I will try to do a way better story than Guitar Hero,but still I like this photostory.Right now this is my best of all of my writing if ever done.

lava lamps



The thing I liked most about my photo story is that the pictures are pictures of some of my favorite lava lamps.The thing I had trouble with was how I did my recording.Next time I will want to write about wrestlers and wrestling cards.