Our part of the community has Elitches and we have an ice cream stand. We also have a candy shop,aquarium ,and recycling center. We also have a school, hospital, and police station.The first problem in our community is there's alot of trash at Elitches.The solution is to put trash cans and recycling bins all around.The second problem is that a wild life preserve doesn't give much to the community.The solution is to also preserve trees to give us oxygen.
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your wrighting contains good details. Next time you should not put air planes right above water. other wise you did a great job.
Next time you should not put airplanes in you drawing they pollute alot.you put good details in your paragraph. it is so cool you did a great job.
Why did you put airplanes in the water.But I liked the rest of the picture.You did good.
I disagree when you say that the wildlife preserve doesn't give much to the community. Think about the Rocky Mountain Arsenal. Do some research and find out how that turned from a highly polluted area in our community, to a very beautiful place filled with native wildlife.
Carlos and group-
I really liked your project, I thought it was really cool! I'm in Mrs. Heaton's Class from Beaufort South Carolina. We also did the exact samething that you guys are doing. You should come check out our blog! I thought your piece of land was very interesting that's very cool that you have an amusement park in your land so did we that's cool! How did you make all your things eco friendly? l really liked your land!
Mary Claire
Beaufort SC
WE need airplanes
we put air planes in the water because we don't have a airport.
I like that you add so much stuff to your picture!!!
carlos-I think you did a really great job on everything.my question is eliches makes air pollution from people screaming and everything,so how can you stop it?I think you need to work on one more thing,your capitalzation
I love your communuity, it has my favorite place the aquarium. I have a question about the ice cream stand. How do you power it being green. Oh and the Hospital is where my mom works there. Sincerly, Huntley Beaufort, SC
We actually meant to remove the plains.
you all used a lot of words. next time you should not put air planes on the water.you did a good job.
Jeremy in our class thought that these planes should be electric so that they don't pollute. His ideas is turning into reality. Cut and paste the link below.
http://www.twine.com/item/12d77lfx2-5y/eco-friendly-electric-aircraft?cmpId=twit
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