1.The best part of my essay is that in the bag it is a baby puppy.
2.The part that still needs work on is the conclusion.
3.The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you can explain something.
4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make my essay more longer.
5 comments:
I love the way you used a lot of details.
you have some spelling errers. but nice story?
i like your story because you have a puppy and how you added a lot of details.
aubriana likes your store.
aubriana likes your store.
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