1. I typed this writing to persuave people to come to field day.
2. The best part about my story is that it persuaves people.
3. I had a hard time finding a picture of kids playing like if was field day.
4. Next time I will try to persuave people even more.
6 comments:
Monica,everything was good but you didnt tell them that its only at like the 6 last day of school.
hey monica it was good but some things don't make sense to me but u still did good.
I like the way you explained what you got to do at field day.
nice job monicat
I think your story was awesome but some things dont make sense.
1st it's not persuave it's persuade
Next great story
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