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12 comments:
Your story sounds like you Antonio. I really laughed the first time I read it. I think you should add more details leading to the funniest moment.
your story was really funny.
I like your story but you missed spelled at least 2 words.
antonio i like that story but the most funniest part to me is when your pants fell down then your face turn red.after that you thought sombody saw you.antonio i bet nobody did.
I thought your story was funny.
I liked your story very much! I have had similar experiences with clothing that did not fit. It really is embarrassing. I liked that you told me about the same problem happening in different places.
An interesting day for you Antonio, I bet you don't forget to wear your belt again.
Impressive story, Antonio! I could imagine it in my mind as I read it! I think you turn some of your sentences into compound sentences to add some more sentence fluency to your writing.
Hi Antonio. I really enjoyed your story. I think you did a great job writing about your emotions, I could actually picture the look on your face!
Mrs. Morgan
I laughed out loud when I read your story. I would have liked to read more! Good job!
I liked the way you descriveed it
hey antonio i like your story because your'e pants fell down
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