I like my story because it is funny.
I will work harder on making my story longer.
Overall, I feel great about my story.
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8 comments:
That must have been funny watching that video!
Monica's story is cool!!!
monica I saw that video to its funny
funny story haha!!!!
Your story is funny because the lady hits herself with a hammock now that is funny.HaHaHaHaHaHaHa!!!
i like our story because when you said that she went crazy that was funny
This is a very funny story. Sometimes our own lives are even funnier than what you see on TV. I want you to spend more time at the beginning brainstorming possible ideas. Sometimes you will spend a lot of time deciding what to write about and then the actual story is very easy to write because your topic is perfect.
i really like your story
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