I LIKE MY WRITING BECAES IT IS ABOUT ME AT A FUNNY TIM
Next time I will POUT MORE DETALS IN MY WRITING
I FEEL GOOD ABOUT MY WRITING
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3 comments:
Stephanie,
Good job on your writing. That seems like an important memory for you. Do you think about that day a lot? Were you scared when it happened? Or were you anxious?
I think a few more details would be a good idea.
Good job.
That was the weirdest day ever, but was it the funniest? Work on adding details about what was going on around you to make your story more interesting. Good job!
Iloved your story
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