The thing I like about writting is printing and doing the final draft so I won't have to do it again.
I will work harder and try to write something and get no mistakes next time.
Overall, I feel happy with this stuff because then I'll be a expert at writting and not make a mistake ever again.
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Hector story is cool!!!
Hector,
Don't be so hard on yourself about writing "being" perfect or making no mistakes. THERE ARE LOTS OF FAMOUS AUTHORS THAT MAKE A GIZZILON MISTAKES and just work at it.
Just like you are doing! You are working and learning like all writers do :)
Funny story!
You got scared by your own costume.HaHa!!!!!!!!!!!!
your story is really funny!!!!!!!!!!!
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
your story is cool !!!!!!!!!!!
I Like the way you describe
your story I think yours and evrybody elses is the best to nice comet hector.
i liked the part were you screamed and your mom got scared because you screamed.
"I was like huh?" I think that is my favorite part. You do a great job with dialogue in your writing, and dialogue is very hard to write!
Remember that writing is process and you have to make mistakes in order to get to a great story. Next time when you are struggling with your first draft, remember this really funny story that was the end result of your hard work.
i think yours is the best in all of the class.yours is the best
hey i like when you screamed when you saw your self in the mirror and screamed
hector i like ur story
u r col becase ur ztory iz fune
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