All the details I put in my writing are the best part of my writing.I thing my fourth paragraph still needs work.
I learnd expostory writing is fun to write.
I shouldwrite more paragraph's in my expository writing.
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i like when you added expression in the topic paragraph.
i like your conclusion
Good job with no mistakes.Of spelling and gammer.
I realy like your words you used. Is your favorite sport kickball.
I realy like your words you used. Is your favorite sport kickball.
RIChie, I liked how you talk about home runs. how you hit the ball out the park.
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