1.The best part of my essay is talking about the bird house.
2.The part that still needs workI show to make it.
3.The main thing I learned about expository wiring ishave to take a lot of time.
4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to tell about more things of the essay.
10 comments:
your story is good and it was good that you told the steps and the things you need.
you did good at expanding details on your story
Your story is very great
That was a cool story, I liked the way you wrote about changing clothes and shoes so they won't get dirty.
I like your writing because it has a lot of detils.Also you tell the reder like he or she going to build a perfect bird house.I also like howe much you write. Mostly I like your voic in this writing it sounds like you.And your writing is exiting.
It is good and you have a lot of details.
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