The best part of my essay is the smartboard.2.The part that stil needs work is the ipod.
3.The mainthing i learned about expositori writing isto explain.
4.Next time i do en assay i would like to do more information.
by Rayel
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
2 comments:
Good job Rayel, also try to use better grammar I couldn't understand your writing.
It was really good but you spelled something wrong.But it was a good story.
Post a Comment