1. The best part of my essay is when I open the bag.
2. The part that still needs work is the conclusion
3.The main idea I learned about expositoy writing is about writing good and neat also about 5 paragraph.
4.Next time I write an expository essay , I would like to do more writing.
2 comments:
you have some spelling errors. b ut it was a good story.
u missed somewords but its still a good story
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