The best part of my essay is that I describes what I do when i am alone.
The part that still needs work is making longer sentences.
The main thing I learned about expository writing is that it's something that you do or something about you.
Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to add more details and make longer sentences.
7 comments:
I like the way you ask yourself ?s.
Nice job do you really know how to do fancy names that's awesome, anyway I really liked your story about what you like to do when your alone.
you spelled eveything good only you made spaces.
Well stephanie drawling really sounds like fun to you and your brother what is your favorite thing to drawl?how long have you been drawling?
That was a very nice story because I love drawing to.
Its cool because it is fun to read it.
i though it was cool and funny
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