I think the best part of my essay is the middle.
The part that needs work is the end.
The main thing I learned about expository writing was its fun.
Next time I write an expository essay I would like to write about football.
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you used a lot of details in your story.
Nice job you used a lot of great details.
The spelling is great.
i think that your story has a lot of exciment.
nice job u did a great job on the beginig.
Quinton it was a good story but you should have more sentences.When you have a chance to read it you would know to put more sentences.The other thing is to end it with a better conclusion.
Quinton your story is very exiting.
i think this story is funny and i like when you said that mr.lewis named his rat cotton ball.
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