How To Play Kickball

1.the best thing is my speling.

2.i need work on gramer.

3.i lerned most about speling.

4.next time i will wite more.

My favorite object

. 1 . The best part of my essay is the smartboard.
2.The part that stil needs work is the ipod.
3.The mainthing i learned about expositori writing isto explain.
4.Next time i do en assay i would like to do more information.

by Rayel

Whats in that bag?????????

I think the best part of my essay is the middle.
The part that needs work is the end.
The main thing I learned about expository writing was its fun.
Next time I write an expository essay I would like to write about football.

What I like to do when I am alone

The best part of my essay is that I describes what I do when i am alone.

The part that still needs work is making longer sentences.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is that it's something that you do or something about you.

Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to add more details and make longer sentences.

HOW TO DO A BIRD HOUSE

1.The best part of my essay is talking about the bird house.

2.The part that still needs workI show to make it.

3.The main thing I learned about expository wiring ishave to take a lot of time.

4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to tell about more things of the essay.

The mystery bag

The best part of my essay is making up all of the stuff that is in the bag and changing the names of the teachers.

The part that still needs work is the ending because it does int have that much details.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is that it has to be about you.

Next time I write an expository assay I would like to add more details.

Chameleon

1.The best part of my story was when I wrout about the chameleans.

2the part that stills needs work is the font.

3the mian thing I learnd about expository writing is when Ihad fun

4 Next timeI will write something else

The teacher placed a bag on my desk...

The best part of my essay is my writing.

The part that still needs work is my spalling.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is to correct my own writing.

How to Feed a Chameleon

1.The best part of my essay is when you get to see the chameleon eat.

2. The part that steel needs work is to not to use a lot of words.

3.The main thing I learned expository writing is that it is hard.

4. Next time I write about my family.

evil sponges

1.The best part of my essay is when I always use voice in my stories because thats how you make your story funny.

2.The part that still needs work is the conclusion because its hard to think of endings.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writting is expository writting is stories that are made up.

4.Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to write about electronics that are not computers or laptops. Like phones,ipods and wires.

All the details I put in my writing are the best part of my writing.

I thing my fourth paragraph still needs work.

I learnd expostory writing is fun to write.

I shouldwrite more paragraph's in my expository writing.

1.The best part of my essay is the middle because it hais a lot of details.

2.The part that still needs work is the bgining because it needs to be biger.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writing is how to make something.

4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make it biger.

Camping

The best part of my essay is when I taught you how to play Bunco.

The part that still needs work is expanding the details.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is the reds, greens,and yellows.

Next time I write an expository writing, I would like to write about my dog.

WHAT'S IN THE BAG

My expository essay

I think the best part of my essay is when the class found out that the chameleons were in the bag.I think my second paragraph could still be improved.The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you mostly explain something.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make my paragraphs longer. Sincerly, Alexis

The mystery bag

1. 1. the best part of my essay is when theres a cat on the bag.

2. the part that still needs work is the conclusion.

3.the main thing I learned about expository writing is to check teds cups.

4. next, time I write an expository essay, I would like to change my conclusion.

how two

1.The best part of my essay is. . .when I say we lick the peanut butter off the knife.

2.The part that still needs work is third sentence.

3.The thing I learn about exspository writing is have fun.

4. Next time I will write about drawing.

How to make a blue spark!

1. The best part of my essay is the spark!
2. The part that still needs work is how exciting it is.
3. The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you have to explain something.
4. Next time I wite an expository essay, I would like to write about something thats more exiteing.

The Mystery Bag

1.The best part of my essay is that in the bag it is a baby puppy.

2.The part that still needs work on is the conclusion.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you can explain something.

4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make my essay more longer.

QUESTIONS FOR TEACHERS

In my reading group I am doing a project about what career I want when I grow up.So all the teachers that are visiting the blog please try to answer them.These questions are for anyone especially for my teacher Mr.Lewis and for any other teacher.

QUESTIONS FOR BEING A TEACHER

1. What do you like about your job?
2. How did you get interested in this job?
3. How much money do you get paid for being a teacher?
4. Is being a teacher hard if it is what is so hard about it?
5. What kinds of things do you do except for teaching?
6. Would you think this is a right job for me?
7. What kind of school would you think would be better for you and what grade?
8. If you had the opportunity to be a principal of your own school would you take it, if yes then why would you take the opportunity?

suprised

1. The best part of my essay is when I open the bag.

2. The part that still needs work is the conclusion

3.The main idea I learned about expositoy writing is about writing good and neat also about 5 paragraph.

4.Next time I write an expository essay , I would like to do more writing.

CHEFS

1. The best part of my writing is I get to cook all my ideas.

2. The part that still needs work is I should put more details.

3. The main thing I learned about expository writing is it is a writing about ethier your life or your future.

4.Next time I write a expository essay,I would like to write about the chameleons. Like what they do or what they eat and who they are married to.

My How-To writing, Taking Care of Chameleons

1. The best part of my essay is that I wrote about our cool class chameleons and that when you read my writing you could take care one of the chameleons at home by yourself.
2. The part is that still needs work is on my 2nd paragraph because I don't have so much details and sentences.
3. The main thing I learned about expository writing is to not try to do a perfect writng because nobody can is perfect. Also I learned that I should try not to rush on my writing.
4. Next time I do and expository essay, I would like to try to put 1 or 2 more sentences in my topic paragraph and my conclusion paragraph.

YOU ARE FREE...

... and living in the north. Would you have helped a slave escape to freedom? The answer seems easy, but there were serious consequences for people who were caught helping slaves.

Comment by telling me if you would have helped and why or why not.

YOU ARE A SLAVE...

... and you just took a journey through the underground railroad to get your freedom. What kinds of difficulties did you encounter? Were the difficulties worth it? Why were you willing to endure these difficulties?

Folsom People

The Folsom People method of hunting was knives,spears but the Folsom points were smaller than the Clovis.

The Folsom People ate buffalo,deer,seeds,nuts and fruits.

The Folsom People lived in tepees and caves.

The Folsom People cooked and then split the buffaloes.They also spoke different languages.The flood uncovered unusually large bison bones .George McJunkin discovered them after a flash flood.

Modified basketmaker

The Modified Basketmaker people used boss and arrows to hunt. They hunted rabbits and deer. The Basketmaker were nomadic, which means they moved from place to place. They lived in pit houses that were dug four feet into the ground. The women were only 5 feet tall and the men were a little bit taller.

Basket Makers

Basket Makers almost didn't hunt,they planted crops. They ate corn and vegetables.

They lived in a cave but they were also nomadic which means they moved from place to place.

Some instersting facs are women cut their hair long and men left their hair long.

Develomental Pueblo

Develomental Pueblo do not hunt they grow crops like corn and squash. Also they raise turkeys. There type of houses are shaped like letters like u,l, and e. Also the bricks are made of sand stone. The houses face south or south west.One interesting fact is that they have ladders to conect different floors.

The Plainview People

The plainview people used spears to kill the buffalo. The plainview people scared the buffalo into the gully.The plainview people ate antelope,deer,buffalo.Here are some interesting facts about the buffalo in 1 year archeoeligists found 190 skeletons of buffalo Because they put the buffalo in the gully and killed them.

great or classic pueblo

The great or classic pueblo used bows and arrows to make hunting easier.What they eat is corn,beans,deer,rabbits and pumpkins.The type of houses they had is buildings with 200 rooms.The interesting facts are they made beautiful designs on pottery and shapes.Another interesting fact is a mano used to grind corn.

On the Loose!

While the class was at specials, Uri and Billybob made an escape from their cage. After a short search, I found them both on the writing bulletin board reading about the writing process.

The Clovis People

The clovis people from Colorado.The clovis people hunt by using pointy spears and they used atlatl to help them throw pointy spears.

The clovis people ate mammoths and ground sloths.

The clovis people lived in caves with little camps in the caves.

Some interesting facts about the clovis people is that the clovis people died because the ice age broke and all the grass and plants died and so the mammoths became extinct because they had nothing to eat and they died so the clovis people had nothing to eat and they died also.And the last interesting fact about the clovis people is that they lived during 9000 B.C.The clovis people are the oldest people in Colorado History.

THAT IS THE REPORT I MADE WITH JASON AND BOBBY ABOUT THE CLOVIS PEOPLE OF COLORADO HISTORY.ALSO I DID THE CLOVIS PEOPLE REPORT ON MY THINK.COM ACCOUNT.

HOLLIDAY OR HELTON

Choose between Matt Holiday or Todd Helton. Who is your favorite player? Isaac thinks Matt Holiday. Gabe thinks Todd Helton. Vote on the survey to the right.

Wildlife Experience Podcast

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Our class went to The Wildlife Experience in Parker. While we were there, we learned about adaptations and watched an IMAX movie about wildfires. If you listen to this podcast you should be able to picture all that we were seeing. Students were describing their surroundings using the Visualizing and Verbalizing structure words.

Mr. Lewis

The cool saturn

This is what we liked. we liked the cars.
This is what we will do differently next time. we wellspeak louder and get closer.
Overall, we really liked our saturn video

Earth

1. This is what we like about our photostory is that we did everything good and that we took our time on it.

2.This is what we will do different next time is that we will finish when Mr.Lewis tells us to finish and not mess around.

3.Overall,we think that our photostory is good.

COME TO NEPTUNE

Me and my PARTNER LIKE OUR CARS.

WE WOULD ONLY PICK ONE CAR.

WE MISS THE PICTURE OF THE GREAT DARK SPOT

trip to Jupiter

this is what we liked i liked the whole photo story.

this is what we will do differently is make it longer.

Overall,we like our photo story a lot.

what it is like on mercury!!

what I like about my story is it has pictures that goes with the words.
what I will try to do better next time is my voice.
overall I think I did a good job!

Mars

What we like about our photostory is our pictures.
What we will do diffrently next time is the narration.
Overall, we absolutly like it.

Story of Pluto

This is what we liked the car.

This is what we will do differently next time we would change the car.

Overall, we liked the photostory.

Info About Uranus

This is what we liked about our movie is that we worked hard on it.
This is what we will do differently next time we will work harder.
Overall,we are proud of are vidio.

Sun

This is what we liked on our sun photostory video is that we put cool pictures and a lot of details.

This is what we are going to do differntly next time,we will do 50% for our narration.

Overall,we feel great about how good we did on our photostory.

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venus

what we liked about our video is it gives us facts about venus.next time we will put more facts about venus.overall,we noticed that it needed more pictures so we could get more facts about venus because I had more stuff to put on our video.

Matt Holliday

Matt Holliday

I admire Matt Holliday because he has 36 home runs, 340. batting average, 137 Runs Batted In, and 214 base hits during the 2007 season. Also I admire Matt Holliday because he’s really cool and awesome and he’s a really good player. Next, I admire Matt Holliday I admire Matt Holliday because last year he was also good he had 34 home runs, 326. batting average, 114 runs batted in, and 202 base hits. He was good last year but this year he’s amazing. And whenever he’s n base and Todd Helton is next to bat and Todd Helton hits a home run and they get to home plate he appreciates that Todd Helton hit a home run and that’s teamwork. And that’s the reason why I admire Matt Holliday.

Antonio's Funny Story

What I like about my writing is that it is really good. Next time I need to work on my spelling. Overall, it is good.

Funny Story by Paul

I like my writing because it is funny. If I did it over again I would improve it by doing it over again. Overall I feel happy.

Fernando's Funny Story

What I like about my writing is how I wrote a lot of details. If I did it over again I would improve my writing. Overall, I feel happy about my story.

Funny story by Jason M.

what i like about my writing is I have alot of writing and its funny. if i did it over again i would make my spelling better and make it more funny.Over all i feel good becouse I did it.

Andrew gone crazy

what I like about my writing is that Mr. Lewis likes the way I describe by story.
If I did it over again I would improve my story.
overoll I felt good about my story.

my funny story by Christian

what i like about my writing is my speeling. If I did it over again I would improve my spelling. Overall, I feel good about my writing.

Funny story by Tavi

What I like about my writing is the part where I screamed like a girl. If I did it over again I would work on spelling and writing. Overall I feel really good about my story. (scribed by Mr. Lewis.)

Funniest Moment

What I like about my story is that it is funny.
If I did it over again I would improve on making more details.
Overal I feel happy and proud of my writing.

THE CRAZY BIRTHDAY by QUIUTON

What I like about my writing is............ the reason I like my story is it is kind of funny,cool If I did it over again I woud improve it by....................... trying to write more and make it longer and more funny. overall I feel................................. really good but coud of been beter.

The Hamster

What i like about my writing is that it is funny. If i did my story over again i would change my conclusion. Overall i feel excited of my writing.

my niece by Gabe M.

What I like about my writing is that it is realistic. If I did it over again I would improve it by making my paragaphs long. Overall I feel berty good about my writeing.

my funny store by stephanie w

I LIKE MY WRITING BECAES IT IS ABOUT ME AT A FUNNY TIM
Next time I will POUT MORE DETALS IN MY WRITING
I FEEL GOOD ABOUT MY WRITING

That Night by Alexis G.

What I like about my writing is that I wrote 5 paragraphs. If I did it over again, I would imprve it by not taking so much time on typing it. Overall, I feel very good about my story because it was 5 paragraphs and because I had a lot of details.

when i scered my grandma

What I like most about my story is the funny part. Next time, I will work harder on my ending sentance. Overall,I feel great about my asome writing.

E beats A? by Abby

What I like most about my writing is my details. Next time, I will work harder on my topic sentance. Overall, I feel great about my fabulous writing.

My Funny Story by Hector

The thing I like about writting is printing and doing the final draft so I won't have to do it again.

I will work harder and try to write something and get no mistakes next time.

Overall, I feel happy with this stuff because then I'll be a expert at writting and not make a mistake ever again.

Visiting Grandparents by Isaac A.

What I like most about my writing is when I missed badly my first time playing pool.
Next time , I will work harder on putting a lot more details in my writing.
Overall,I fell awesome about my writing.

Falling on a Mud Puddle by Stephanie S.

What I like most about my writing is that it's realy funny.

Next time,i will work on expanding my funny part.

Overall,all i feel happy about my story.

Ladies Gone Crazy by Monica

I like my story because it is funny.

I will work harder on making my story longer.

Overall, I feel great about my story.