what i like about my writing is I have alot of writing and its funny. if i did it over again i would make my spelling better and make it more funny.Over all i feel good becouse I did it.
what I like about my writing is that Mr. Lewis likes the way I describe by story. If I did it over again I would improve my story. overoll I felt good about my story.
What I like about my writing is the part where I screamed like a girl. If I did it over again I would work on spelling and writing. Overall I feel really good about my story. (scribed by Mr. Lewis.)
What I like about my story is that it is funny. If I did it over again I would improve on making more details. Overal I feel happy and proud of my writing.
What I like about my writing is............ the reason I like my story is it is kind of funny,cool If I did it over again I woud improve it by....................... trying to write more and make it longer and more funny. overall I feel................................. really good but coud of been beter.
What I like about my writing is that it is realistic. If I did it over again I would improve it by making my paragaphs long. Overall I feel berty good about my writeing.
What I like about my writing is that I wrote 5 paragraphs. If I did it over again, I would imprve it by not taking so much time on typing it. Overall, I feel very good about my story because it was 5 paragraphs and because I had a lot of details.
What I like most about my writing is when I missed badly my first time playing pool. Next time , I will work harder on putting a lot more details in my writing. Overall,I fell awesome about my writing.
What I like most about my writng is when I put alot of details in the funny part of the story. Next time,I will work harder on to put more writing in my paragraphs. Overall,I fell really great about my writing.
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