You did a really nice job of matching your photos and your narration. I appreciated when you showed the picture of WalMart.
I agree with your classmates that it was a little hard to hear you at times. Maybe just remember to keep the microphone a consistent distance from your mouth.
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I like your writing but it needs to be longer.
Your writing really was great,but you have to have your voice go louder
your picters are good
That is alsome
"my writting is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
jason your story was good and the volume was excellent. You had really good pictures and captions.
I really like your car
You did a really nice job of matching your photos and your narration. I appreciated when you showed the picture of WalMart.
I agree with your classmates that it was a little hard to hear you at times. Maybe just remember to keep the microphone a consistent distance from your mouth.
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