Friday, September 21, 2007

Antonio's Funny Story

What I like about my writing is that it is really good. Next time I need to work on my spelling. Overall, it is good.

Funny Story by Paul


I like my writing because it is funny. If I did it over again I would improve it by doing it over again. Overall I feel happy.

Fernando's Funny Story


What I like about my writing is how I wrote a lot of details. If I did it over again I would improve my writing. Overall, I feel happy about my story.

Funny story by Jason M.




what i like about my writing is I have alot of writing and its funny. if i did it over again i would make my spelling better and make it more funny.Over all i feel good becouse I did it.

Andrew gone crazy

what I like about my writing is that Mr. Lewis likes the way I describe by story.
If I did it over again I would improve my story.
overoll I felt good about my story.

my funny story by Christian


what i like about my writing is my speeling. If I did it over again I would improve my spelling. Overall, I feel good about my writing.

Funny story by Tavi

What I like about my writing is the part where I screamed like a girl. If I did it over again I would work on spelling and writing. Overall I feel really good about my story. (scribed by Mr. Lewis.)

Funniest Moment

What I like about my story is that it is funny.
If I did it over again I would improve on making more details.
Overal I feel happy and proud of my writing.

THE CRAZY BIRTHDAY by QUIUTON


What I like about my writing is............ the reason I like my story is it is kind of funny,cool If I did it over again I woud improve it by....................... trying to write more and make it longer and more funny. overall I feel................................. really good but coud of been beter.

The Hamster


What i like about my writing is that it is funny. If i did my story over again i would change my conclusion. Overall i feel excited of my writing.

my niece by Gabe M.


What I like about my writing is that it is realistic. If I did it over again I would improve it by making my paragaphs long. Overall I feel berty good about my writeing.

my funny store by stephanie w


I LIKE MY WRITING BECAES IT IS ABOUT ME AT A FUNNY TIM
Next time I will POUT MORE DETALS IN MY WRITING
I FEEL GOOD ABOUT MY WRITING

That Night by Alexis G.


What I like about my writing is that I wrote 5 paragraphs. If I did it over again, I would imprve it by not taking so much time on typing it. Overall, I feel very good about my story because it was 5 paragraphs and because I had a lot of details.

Wednesday, September 19, 2007

when i scered my grandma


What I like most about my story is the funny part. Next time, I will work harder on my ending sentance. Overall,I feel great about my asome writing.

E beats A? by Abby


What I like most about my writing is my details. Next time, I will work harder on my topic sentance. Overall, I feel great about my fabulous writing.

My Funny Story by Hector




The thing I like about writting is printing and doing the final draft so I won't have to do it again.

I will work harder and try to write something and get no mistakes next time.
Overall, I feel happy with this stuff because then I'll be a expert at writting and not make a mistake ever again.

Visiting Grandparents by Isaac A.



What I like most about my writing is when I missed badly my first time playing pool.
Next time , I will work harder on putting a lot more details in my writing.
Overall,I fell awesome about my writing.

Falling on a Mud Puddle by Stephanie S.

What I like most about my writing is that it's realy funny.
Next time,i will work on expanding my funny part.
Overall,all i feel happy about my story.



Ladies Gone Crazy by Monica


I like my story because it is funny.

I will work harder on making my story longer.

Overall, I feel great about my story.




My Funny Story by Erik G.


What I like most about my writng is when I put alot of details in the funny part of the story. Next time,I will work harder on to put more writing in my paragraphs. Overall,I fell really great about my writing.








Monday, September 17, 2007

What's a Wiki?

It is a webpage that we can create as a class. Just take a look here to find out!
Wikispaces
Take some time to look around. Answer the questions by clicking on Edit this page at the top of the page. Who else do you think will visit? What else could we add to it?

Friday, September 7, 2007

Introducing...

Room 24, please introduce yourself. Tell us only your first name and then an interesting fact about yourself.