Friday, September 21, 2007

Antonio's Funny Story

What I like about my writing is that it is really good. Next time I need to work on my spelling. Overall, it is good.

12 comments:

Jeff Lewis said...

Your story sounds like you Antonio. I really laughed the first time I read it. I think you should add more details leading to the funniest moment.

monicat said...

your story was really funny.

uriel.r said...

I like your story but you missed spelled at least 2 words.

hector m said...

antonio i like that story but the most funniest part to me is when your pants fell down then your face turn red.after that you thought sombody saw you.antonio i bet nobody did.

ashlyn z said...

I thought your story was funny.

M. Loeb said...

I liked your story very much! I have had similar experiences with clothing that did not fit. It really is embarrassing. I liked that you told me about the same problem happening in different places.

Dave Tarwater said...

An interesting day for you Antonio, I bet you don't forget to wear your belt again.

Emily Taylor said...

Impressive story, Antonio! I could imagine it in my mind as I read it! I think you turn some of your sentences into compound sentences to add some more sentence fluency to your writing.

Lindsay said...

Hi Antonio. I really enjoyed your story. I think you did a great job writing about your emotions, I could actually picture the look on your face!
Mrs. Morgan

Anonymous said...

I laughed out loud when I read your story. I would have liked to read more! Good job!

bobby said...

I liked the way you descriveed it

stephanie s said...

hey antonio i like your story because your'e pants fell down