Wednesday, September 19, 2007

My Funny Story by Hector




The thing I like about writting is printing and doing the final draft so I won't have to do it again.

I will work harder and try to write something and get no mistakes next time.
Overall, I feel happy with this stuff because then I'll be a expert at writting and not make a mistake ever again.

13 comments:

Erik G. said...

Hector story is cool!!!

Deborah said...

Hector,

Don't be so hard on yourself about writing "being" perfect or making no mistakes. THERE ARE LOTS OF FAMOUS AUTHORS THAT MAKE A GIZZILON MISTAKES and just work at it.
Just like you are doing! You are working and learning like all writers do :)

Funny story!

Erik G. said...

You got scared by your own costume.HaHa!!!!!!!!!!!!

stephanie s said...

your story is really funny!!!!!!!!!!!

abigailm said...

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah

edith r said...

your story is cool !!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

I Like the way you describe
your story I think yours and evrybody elses is the best to nice comet hector.

monicat said...

i liked the part were you screamed and your mom got scared because you screamed.

Jeff Lewis said...

"I was like huh?" I think that is my favorite part. You do a great job with dialogue in your writing, and dialogue is very hard to write!

Remember that writing is process and you have to make mistakes in order to get to a great story. Next time when you are struggling with your first draft, remember this really funny story that was the end result of your hard work.

olga.zuniga said...

i think yours is the best in all of the class.yours is the best

stephanie s said...

hey i like when you screamed when you saw your self in the mirror and screamed

antonioc.alsup@think.com said...

hector i like ur story

hector m said...

u r col becase ur ztory iz fune