Friday, September 21, 2007

THE CRAZY BIRTHDAY by QUIUTON


What I like about my writing is............ the reason I like my story is it is kind of funny,cool If I did it over again I woud improve it by....................... trying to write more and make it longer and more funny. overall I feel................................. really good but coud of been beter.

4 comments:

Jeff Lewis said...

Quinton, you could make the story even funnier by adding lots of details about the scene. I am glad you wrote that in your reflection.

bobby said...

quinton I liked the way you descrived your story.

stephanie s said...

hey i like your story because the little girl open the cage and the rabbit ran out

bobby said...

i like your story