Guitar Hero.Unleash your power of Guitar Hero!!

The thing I most like is the pictures of guitar hero.The thing I had a hard time was writing the story and making up the story.Next time I will try to do a way better story than Guitar Hero,but still I like this photostory.Right now this is my best of all of my writing if ever done.

evil sponges

1.The best part of my essay is when I always use voice in my stories because thats how you make your story funny.

2.The part that still needs work is the conclusion because its hard to think of endings.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writting is expository writting is stories that are made up.

4.Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to write about electronics that are not computers or laptops. Like phones,ipods and wires.

great or classic pueblo

The great or classic pueblo used bows and arrows to make hunting easier.What they eat is corn,beans,deer,rabbits and pumpkins.The type of houses they had is buildings with 200 rooms.The interesting facts are they made beautiful designs on pottery and shapes.Another interesting fact is a mano used to grind corn.

venus

what we liked about our video is it gives us facts about venus.next time we will put more facts about venus.overall,we noticed that it needed more pictures so we could get more facts about venus because I had more stuff to put on our video.

My Funny Story by Hector

The thing I like about writting is printing and doing the final draft so I won't have to do it again.

I will work harder and try to write something and get no mistakes next time.

Overall, I feel happy with this stuff because then I'll be a expert at writting and not make a mistake ever again.