Thursday, December 20, 2007

evil sponges

1.The best part of my essay is when I always use voice in my stories because thats how you make your story funny.

2.The part that still needs work is the conclusion because its hard to think of endings.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writting is expository writting is stories that are made up.

4.Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to write about electronics that are not computers or laptops. Like phones,ipods and wires.

1 comment:

isaac a said...

Where you scared you because u might not make it to 5th grade. I like your writing.