Wednesday, December 19, 2007


My expository essay

I think the best part of my essay is when the class found out that the chameleons were in the bag.I think my second paragraph could still be improved.The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you mostly explain something.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make my paragraphs longer. Sincerly, Alexis

1 comment:

alexisg said...

What I like about my writing is that I didn't really have any spelling mistakes.I also like that I used good dialogue.