Tuesday, December 18, 2007


1. The best part of my essay is when I open the bag.

2. The part that still needs work is the conclusion

3.The main idea I learned about expositoy writing is about writing good and neat also about 5 paragraph.

4.Next time I write an expository essay , I would like to do more writing.


monicat said...

you have some spelling errors. b ut it was a good story.

edith r said...

u missed somewords but its still a good story