Thursday, December 20, 2007


The best part of my essay is when I taught you how to play Bunco.

The part that still needs work is expanding the details.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is the reds, greens,and yellows.

Next time I write an expository writing, I would like to write about my dog.

1 comment:

stephanie w said...

I like your store because it hase a lot of details.