Monday, May 18, 2009

We could take care of our environment by doing some very simple things.You should pick up trash.You should also fix broken toys and ride your bike more.

I can ride my bike more.I can ride my bike to King Soopers.I can also ride it to the corner store.If I rode my bike everywhere, it would cut down on the use of fossil fuels, and less pollution.It will cost less money.

Next, I could fix my broken toys and bike.It will be fun.I will be able to make a new toy.I will be able to use tools.It will cause less trash in the dump.

Finally, I will pick up trash.It will help our environment.It will also keep us from tripping.If the park has trash we won't be able to play in it.It will keep us from falling on cans.

That is my writing.Now go save the world.Do you recycle?


Fernando said...

I realy liked your writing it has good expression!! one thing you can you can do better is take away it will couse us from triping.

Daniel said...

I really liked the way you put every thing you can do and how you can do it.Next time I think you should make longer paragraphs,but thats just my opinion.Overall I really like your writing.

Servando said...

carlos I really like your writing it shows lots of expretion.I agree with daniel you should make your paragraph longer. otherwise it is an awsome paragraph.