Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Ladies Gone Crazy by Monica


I like my story because it is funny.

I will work harder on making my story longer.

Overall, I feel great about my story.




8 comments:

abigailm said...

That must have been funny watching that video!

Erik G. said...

Monica's story is cool!!!

hector m said...

monica I saw that video to its funny

edith r said...

funny story haha!!!!

Erik G. said...

Your story is funny because the lady hits herself with a hammock now that is funny.HaHaHaHaHaHaHa!!!

stephanie s said...

i like our story because when you said that she went crazy that was funny

Jeff Lewis said...

This is a very funny story. Sometimes our own lives are even funnier than what you see on TV. I want you to spend more time at the beginning brainstorming possible ideas. Sometimes you will spend a lot of time deciding what to write about and then the actual story is very easy to write because your topic is perfect.

olgaz.@think.com said...

i really like your story