what i like about my writing is my speeling. If I did it over again I would improve my spelling. Overall, I feel good about my writing.
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I think your spelling has really improved Christian. This is a good, and painful story. Next time, see if you can include more details to make the story longer. It is good to keep the reader in suspense before you reveal the funny part at the end.
What I like about your story is that it is very funny and it makes me want to read more
greatjob
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