Friday, September 21, 2007

my funny story by Christian


what i like about my writing is my speeling. If I did it over again I would improve my spelling. Overall, I feel good about my writing.

3 comments:

Jeff Lewis said...

I think your spelling has really improved Christian. This is a good, and painful story. Next time, see if you can include more details to make the story longer. It is good to keep the reader in suspense before you reveal the funny part at the end.

quinton p said...

What I like about your story is that it is very funny and it makes me want to read more

bobby said...

greatjob