Wednesday, December 19, 2007

how two


1.The best part of my essay is. . .when I say we lick the peanut butter off the knife.
2.The part that still needs work is third sentence.
3.The thing I learn about exspository writing is have fun.
4. Next time I will write about drawing.

2 comments:

quinton p said...

Well paul it must be fun making a penaut butter and jelly sandwich and it must tasye pretty yummmmmmmmmyyyy

jose c said...

Paul is peanut butter your favorite food.