Thursday, December 20, 2007

What I like to do when I am alone


The best part of my essay is that I describes what I do when i am alone.


The part that still needs work is making longer sentences.


The main thing I learned about expository writing is that it's something that you do or something about you.


Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to add more details and make longer sentences.

7 comments:

ashlyn z said...

I like the way you ask yourself ?s.

Erik G. said...

Nice job do you really know how to do fancy names that's awesome, anyway I really liked your story about what you like to do when your alone.

jason m said...

you spelled eveything good only you made spaces.

quinton p said...

Well stephanie drawling really sounds like fun to you and your brother what is your favorite thing to drawl?how long have you been drawling?

paul l said...

That was a very nice story because I love drawing to.

stephanie w said...

Its cool because it is fun to read it.

Anonymous said...

i though it was cool and funny