Thursday, December 20, 2007

Whats in that bag?????????




I think the best part of my essay is the middle.
The part that needs work is the end.
The main thing I learned about expository writing was its fun.
Next time I write an expository essay I would like to write about football.

9 comments:

ashlyn z said...

you used a lot of details in your story.

Erik G. said...

Nice job you used a lot of great details.

paul l said...
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paul l said...

The spelling is great.

monicat said...

i think that your story has a lot of exciment.

edith r said...

nice job u did a great job on the beginig.

hector m said...

Quinton it was a good story but you should have more sentences.When you have a chance to read it you would know to put more sentences.The other thing is to end it with a better conclusion.

christian a said...

Quinton your story is very exiting.

stephanie s said...

i think this story is funny and i like when you said that mr.lewis named his rat cotton ball.